PATCH: minor zftpsys doc changes.

[Peter Stephenson <pws@xxxxxxx>]

I noticed some small errors when reading through this.

I will also commit the change in 15893 to make zftp require zsh/net/tcp.  I
left it out in case I got the time to produce a more general patch which
makes lists of dependencies at compile time, compiles them into each module
which needs it, and handles the whole list at once when a module is
loaded, including unloading any earlier modules which were just loaded if a
later module in the list fails to load.  There's a fascinating exercise for
someone.

Index: Doc/Zsh/zftpsys.yo
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/zsh/zsh/Doc/Zsh/zftpsys.yo,v
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.8 zftpsys.yo
--- Doc/Zsh/zftpsys.yo	2001/04/02 13:04:05	1.8
+++ Doc/Zsh/zftpsys.yo	2001/10/26 11:01:59
@@ -173,7 +173,8 @@
 var(dir) are passed directly to the server and their effect is
 implementation dependent, but specifying a particular remote directory
 var(dir) is usually possible.  The output is passed through a pager
-given by the environment variable tt($PAGER) or defaulting to `tt(more)'.
+given by the environment variable tt($PAGER), or `tt(more)' if that is not
+set.
 
 The directory is usually cached for re-use.  In fact, two caches are
 maintained.  One is for use when there is no var(dir-options) or var(dir),
@@ -357,7 +358,7 @@
 item(tt(zftransfer) var(sess1)tt(:)var(file1) var(sess2)tt(:)var(file2))(
 Transfer files between two sessions; no local copy is made.  The file
 is read from the session var(sess1) as var(file1) and written to session
-var(sess1) as file var(file2); var(file1) and var(file2) may be relative to
+var(sess2) as file var(file2); var(file1) and var(file2) may be relative to
 the current directories of the session.  Either var(sess1) or var(sess2)
 may be omitted (though the colon should be retained if there is a
 possibility of a colon appearing in the file name) and defaults to the
@@ -366,8 +367,8 @@
 var(sess1) and var(sess2) must be distinct.
 
 The operation is performed using pipes, so it is required that the
-connections still be valid in a subshell, which is not the case under some
-versions operating systems, presumably due to a system bug.
+connections still be valid in a subshell, which is not the case under 
+versions of some operating systems, presumably due to a system bug.
 )
 enditem()
 
@@ -385,7 +386,7 @@
 If given an argument, mark the current host, user and directory under the
 name var(bookmark) for later use by tt(zfgoto).  If there is no connection
 open, use the values for the last connection immediately before it was
-closed; it is an error if there is none.  Any existing bookmark
+closed; it is an error if there was none.  Any existing bookmark
 under the same name will be silently replaced.
 
 If not given an argument, list the existing bookmarks and the points to
@@ -517,8 +518,8 @@
 ifzman(zmanref(zshmodules))\
 ifnzman(noderef(The zsh/zutil Module)). Briefly, the
 command `tt(zstyle ':zftp:*') var(style) var(value) ...'.
-defines the var(style) to have value var(value) (more than one may be
-given, although that is not useful in the cases described here).  These
+defines the var(style) to have value var(value); more than one value may be
+given, although that is not useful in the cases described here.  These
 values will then be used throughout the zftp function system.  For more
 precise control, the first argument, which gives a context in which the
 style applies, can be modified to include a particular function, as for

-- 
Peter Stephenson <pws@xxxxxxx>                  Software Engineer
CSR Ltd., Science Park, Milton Road,
Cambridge, CB4 0WH, UK                          Tel: +44 (0)1223 392070


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